I am enjoying this story so far! There are some grammatical errors but I am working my way around them. I can't wait to when Sesshomaru kicks Inuyasha's ass for being such an insufferable bastard, like wow, he needs to be sat until he reaches the other half of the planet for his shit attitude and atrocious behavior.
HI , I LOVE YOUR FANFIC ''FROST BITE ''.....I HOPE YOU UPDATE IT SOON....IT HAS BEEN MONTHS SINCE YOU LAST UPDATED....CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE....ESPECIALLY ABOUT KAGOME'S TRAINING , HER POWERS , AND ANY SPECIAL ABILITIES THAT ANY OF HER WEAPONS MAY HAVE....OR ANY SPECIAL ABILITIES SHE MAY HAVE LIKE THE ELEMENTAL ABILITIES,AND WHERE SHE FROZE TIME WHEN SHE WAS WITH SANGO AND THE OTHERS.....AM I CORRECT IN THINKING KAGOME IS YOUKAI AND MIKO....DOES SHE ALSO HAVE DEMI-GOSSESS POWERS,,,IF SO WHAT ?....WILL SHE HAVE YOUKAI MARKINGS, CLAWS ,FANGS, A TAIL, WILL SHE HAVE A YOUKAI CLOUD TO FLY ON, WILL SHE HAVE A BALL OF LIGHT TO FLY IN LIKE SESSHOUMARU....I KNOW YOUR WROTE THAT SHE WILL TRANSFORM INTO HER TRUE FORM ...IS IT AN INU TRUE FORM LIKE ONE OF HER SOUL YOUKAI....SHE HAD KITSUNE,INUYOUKAI,I DON'T REMEMBER WHAT THE OTHER YOUKAI SOUL RELEASED WAS....THERE WERE 3YOUKAI, DEMI-GODDESS,ELEMENTAL,MIDORIKO,KIKYO....THOSE WERE THE ONLY ONES RELEASED....WHAT POWERS WILL SHE HAVE FROM THE KITSUNE...ILLUSIONS, DUPLICATION, TRANSFORM INTO ANTHING SHE WANTS LIKE SHIPPO, FOXFIRE, KITSUNE MAGIC, TELEPORTATION ARE ALL KITSUNE THINGS SHIPPO CAN DO...WHAT ABOUT DEMI-GODDESS POWERS....SHE SHOULD LEARN TO MAKE NECKLACES LIKE INUYASHA'S-KOTADOMA'S, AND TO MAKE SUTRA'S AND ODUDA'S LIKE KAEDE, TO SEAL AND ENCHANT THINGS LIKE KAEDE...MAKE ALL TYPES OF BARRIERS SO INUYASHA CAN'T FIND HER LIKE A CONSEALING BARRIER -TO HIDE HER FROM SIGHT, HIDE HER SCENT AND AURA................................................................TDAN
Awesome update!!!! Keep up the great writing!!
So far this is a really fun story, I'm excited for more!
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