Loving this story. Can't wait to continue reading.

Good chapter. 

Nice chapter.

Ahhhhh!!!! I can't wait to read this chapter ?? just wanna reread the fanfic first! 

I do love this story please keep going. 

Great chapter.

Please keep going I have loved this story for years

One of the few stories i always come back to reread one of my favorites if you know any writers as good as you you should get them to finish it really on of my favorites just wished you finished but thats life

Hello,

I absolutely love it when writer decide to give Naraku an actual personality!!! You did a very good job so far, because while you show another side of him (the loving and caring one) he is in no way ooc. His handling of the issue with Kagome's mother proves this. So he is still the cruel and always plooting person we know him to be, but it's NOT his only side. Very well done!!!

Little Kagome is just adorable! She is really smert for her age, and I cannot even start to understand, how her own mother could treat her that way! :( Anyway Kagome has a lot of papas and mommas out there :D I'm curious to see, how Kagome will handle all the males who see her as a daughter, they are sure to get jealous about each other - but Kagome is a smart one, she will figure it out ;)

I would really like it, if you could explain in a chapter, how Naraku became to be a part of the pack. I think this is very interesting!

I absolutely support your decision to focus at the beginning on Kagome's childhood. Don't rush things unnecessary just to come to the Sess/Kag part!!! I find the relationship they both have really interesting, and don't feel the need to finally see some romantic development with Kagome as a grown up!!!

I would like to read more about the actual project "Chrystal Hearts" other than it being stolen, there hasn't been much input about it. And with Naraku being the one to develop it, I cannot think of whom this "master" could be ... Let's see where you will be going with this story!

I'm looking forward to your next update!

I love that Kagome is revealing her powers and how smart she is can't wait to read more please update soon.

 still here thank you for the update.loved it.

????????????????????????????????????I was lonely waiting on new chapter.  This is good they getting alone can’t wait to see what happen. I really enjOyed readin this new chapter, thoght It was goin to end badly but it didn’.  From dory’s “just keep swimming“.Anyway I hate trying to pay for words too,????????.  I know some school give word free to students for a year. Thanks for a new chapter, as I start from the beginnig again

Please continue this! It’s an amazing story and I love your writing!

I love this and patience waiting for a new chapter or more.  Please write more. Thnks????????????????????

Please keep writing this. I love it. 

Reminds me of a Matilda/InuYasha mix

next chapter please

Love the story, keep it coming.

i really love this story thanks for the update.

this chapter did not dissapoint! great chapter!