This oneshot was PHENOMENAL!!! Wow! Just to see our usual group of characters, the build of suspense, everything! Thanks so much for writing/sharing this with us! Oh and I looked up the Domes. So cool to really picture the structures you were having them explore/run through <3

It was kind of droning on so I read forward! I'm glad I did. I really wish I was given a warning. This is not the type of stories I personally like. They cause anxiety in me. Thankfully I didn't read the whole thing only to be disappointed in the end. Even the ending kinda seems incomplete. Just wished for atleast a "dark" warning or heads up. Especially since in the ending he raped her. 

The horror and suspense in this story had me sitting on the edge of my sit the entire time!  The ending gave me chills because now she can't escape, and she will be with him forever.  I just can't express how much I enjoyed this gem!  Amazing!!!

Wow , well done. That was amazing. Thank you

I usually don't write reviews, but that was a good story. 

WOW ..... did not see that story getting so dark .... stunned. But on another note .... so well written and what an original plot. Thank you!!

Completly terrifying, not my usual taste but i enjoyed it. Somewhere deep down I was hoping there would be a happy ending for Kagome but essentially she was dealing with the devil. Hope to see more works from you. Oh and it was very well written!

Ah, yes, the one part of CG I NEVER want to be near. Great job!!!